Set 1: 3 &4

Wang Yani: A Young Chinese Artist


Spelling focus: Dropping final [e] before adding suffixes that begin with vowels.

* (3.) Wang Yani was born in 1975 she growed up in gongcheng China.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
Gongcheng (places)
PUNCTUATION
period (End marks: with declaratives) & commas (in addresses)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Run-on sentence

Wang Yani was born in 1975. She grew up in Gongcheng, China.

* The asterisk means that you may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

(4.) Her enjoyed walking along the river and exploreing the countryside near gongcheng.

SPELLING: exploring
CAPITALIZATION
Gongcheng (proper nouns-places)
PUNCTUATION
ok
GRAMMAR & USAGE
She vs. Her (pronoun case of subjects)

She enjoyed walking along the river and exploring the countryside near Gongcheng.

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