Set 1 Sentence 5 & 6 Corrections:

Wang Yani: A Young Chinese Artist

Spelling focus: Dropping final e before adding suffixes that begin with vowels.

(5.) Yani began to draw animals trees and other natureal thing

SPELLING: natural
CAPITALIZATION ok
PUNCTUATION period (End marks: with declaratives) & commas (in a series)
GRAMMAR & USAGE things vs thing (regular plurals)

Yani began to draw animals, trees, and other natural things.

*(6.) she saw monkeys at the Nanning Zoo she decided to paint them.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION She (first word in sentence)
PUNCTUATION period (End marks: with declaratives)
GRAMMAR & USAGE Run-on sentence

She saw monkeys at the Nanning Zoo. She decided to paint them.

* The asterisk means that you may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

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