Set 1 Sentences 9 & 10 Corrections:

Wang Yani: A Young Chinese Artist

Spelling focus: Dropping final e before adding suffixes that begin with vowels.

(9.) Yani painted many monkeys but later she beginned too paint other subjects.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION ok
PUNCTUATION commas (with coordinating conjunctions)
GRAMMAR & USAGE began vs beginned (Verb Tense: irregular past tense)

Yani painted many monkeys, but later she began to paint other subjects.

* (10.) Many of Yani's paintings illustrateions of stories from her imagination

SPELLING: illustrations
CAPITALIZATION ok
PUNCTUATION period (end marks with declaratives)
GRAMMAR & USAGE add are (sentence fragment)

Many of Yani's paintings are illustrations of stories from her imagination.

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