Set 4: Sentences Corrections 3 & 4

King Louis XIV

King Louis XIV


Spelling focus: Adding the suffix [-er] to mean "one who does"

(3.) In those days the noblemans of france often challenged the king's power.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
Proper nouns (places)
PUNCTUATION
ok
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Plurals (irregular plurals)

In those days the noblemen of France often challenged the king's power.

*(4.) Louis was a clever leadder him kept them nobles busy with endless ceremonies.

SPELLING: leader
CAPITALIZATION
First words (in sentences)
PUNCTUATION
End marks (with declaratives)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Pronoun case (of subjects) Run-on sentence
Adjectives (them vs. those )

Louis was a clever leader. He kept those nobles busy with endless ceremonies.

* An asterisk [*] before a correct sentence means the student may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

 

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