Set 5: Sentence 3 & 4 Correctons

How do animals keep cool?

Happy Sun


Spelling focus: prefixes, base words, and roots

(3.) in hot climates, many mammals has large ear for keeping cool.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
First words (in sentences)
PUNCTUATION
ok
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Plurals (regular plurals) Agreement: (of subjects and verbs)

In hot climates, many mammals have large ears for keeping cool.

*(4.) Heat is lost through the animals' ears this loss re-duces they're temperature.

SPELLING: reduces
CAPITALIZATION
First words (in sentences)
PUNCTUATION
End marks (with declaratives)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Run-on sentence, Pronouns (possessives vs. contractions)

Heat is lost through the animals' ears. This loss reduces their temperature.

* An asterisk [*] before a correct sentence means the student may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

 

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