Rosa Parks

Rosa Parks

Set 7: Sentences 1 & 2 Corrections


Spelling focus: Plurals formed with [es]

* (1.) Once African americans in the south couldn't never sit with white people on busses.

SPELLING: buses
CAPITALIZATION
Proper nouns: (organizations, religions, languages, nationalities)
Proper nouns: (regions)
PUNCTUATION
ok
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Double negatives

* Once African Americans in the South couldn't sit with white people on buses.

(2.) A woman named Rosa parks figthed two change this unfair law.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
Proper nouns: (people and animals)
PUNCTUATION
ok
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Verb tense (irregular past tense),
Commonly confused words: (to, two, too)

A woman named Rosa Parks fought to change this unfair law.

* An asterisk [*] before a correct sentence means the student may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

 

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