Rosa Parks

Rosa Parks

Set 7: Sentences 5 & 6 Corrections


Spelling focus: Plurals formed with [es]

(5.) On thursday december 1, 1955 Parks get on a bus.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
Proper nouns (days and holidays) Proper nouns (months)
PUNCTUATION
Commas (in dates)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Verb tense (irregular past tense)

On Thursday, December 1, 1955, Parks go on a bus.

* (6.) Parks sitting in the section for blacks or whites but one white person didn't have no seat.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
ok
PUNCTUATION
Commas (with coordinating conjunctions)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Sentence fragments Double negatives
Verb forms
(helping verbs with present participles)

*Parks was sitting in the section for blacks or whites, but one white person had no seat.

* An asterisk [*] before a correct sentence means the student may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.  

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