Rosa Parks

Rosa Parks

Set 7: Sentences 7 & 8 Corrections


Spelling focus: Plurals formed with [es]

*(7.) "Get up!" yell the bus driver but parks wouldn't move no way.

SPELLING: ok
CAPITALIZATION
Proper nouns (people and animals)
PUNCTUATION
Commas (with coordination conjunctions)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Verb tense (regular past tense), Double negatives

*"Get up!" yelled the bus driver, but Parks wouldn't move.

*(8.) Parks goed to jail it was the first of many clashs to come.

SPELLING: clashes
CAPITALIZATION
First words (in sentences)
PUNCTUATION
End marks (with declaratives)
GRAMMAR & USAGE
Run-on sentence, Verb tense (irregular past tense)

*"Parks went to jail. It was the first of many clashes to come.


* An asterisk [*] before a correct sentence means the student may correct an error in more than one way, as when fixing fragments, run-ons, and double negatives.

 

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